SoCS – bat bet bit bot but


I want to see
I’m blind

I want to hear
I’m deaf

I want to do
I can’t

I want to be
I’m not

I want to know
I don’t

I want to remember
I’m eluded

This was written for Linda G. Hill’s weekly SoCS challenge.

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Happy Saturday!

8 comments for “SoCS – bat bet bit bot but

  1. November 12, 2014 at 9:06 am

    I love the build up you have used! I wasn’t sure at first, but read it again. And I loved it 😀

  2. November 8, 2014 at 9:59 pm

    Sounds very frustrating! But I think we all feel these things sometimes. Nice poem, Leigh! 😀

    • November 8, 2014 at 10:04 pm

      Thank you.

      Why do your prompts always lead me to write poetry??? 😉

      (It’s a good thing.) 😀

      • November 8, 2014 at 10:05 pm

        You’re not alone! Wes (from Nearlywes) said the same thing yesterday – and then he wrote a poem. 🙂

        • November 8, 2014 at 10:10 pm

          Well! At least I’m not alone. I usually am ;-).

  3. November 8, 2014 at 9:43 pm

    I like this! I can actually relate to the last line. Thanks for stopping by and taking a peek into my diary. 🙂

    • November 8, 2014 at 9:45 pm

      It’s all actually supposed to lead up to the last line!
      Thanks for stopping by mine! 🙂

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